blog 12

I think this scene has one very evident strength and that is in the descriptions. The descriptions are very vivid and my peers agreed that the description allows for a clear picture while reading it. I am proud of the descriptions because that is something I worked a lot on this semester. A weakness in the scene could be the dialogue. I have found that when I am writing dialogue that explains something the dialogue becomes less int4eresting and intriguing and more expository. I would like to work on that in this scene. I think if I could make the dialogue less dry while still getting the point across then the scene would be better. If I had more time to work on this scene the dialogue would be something I would want to fix, but I would also like to try and play with the camera angles. I found that one of the hardest parts about writing the script using celtex. I would write the scene then go back and put in camera angles. I think it would be helpful if I was able to see what kind of camera angles are often used so I could try and incorporate them into my script. I put basic camera angles into my scene, but I think it would be fun and useful to explore other camera angles and figure then use them in my scene and throughout my whole script.