An insecure murdered girl, stuck in a world between life and death, is forced to face her inner demons and solve her murder before another girl falls victim.
ITS SUSIE SALMON! But really though, this story looks very intriguing and like it will be an absolute thriller that will leave people at the edge of their seats. I think it is short and to the point and really exemplifies what a logline should be like.
1.I dont know what question number 1 was, so here is my answer. 2. This sounds just like lovley bones...hmmmm...plagerizsm?! 3. I know i spelled that word wrong.
Personally I think this also sounds like the movie "I know who Killed me" starring Lindsey Lohan...but hey if you can add a you're own twist to the movie, I'm sure you can make it work
It remins me a little of the book called "Elsewhere" too. I think Tara is right, that it is a little bit familiar BUT if you can perhaps create a unique "in between" world, it will still hook people into it.
That sounds quite interesting and I really don't have any criticism for the logline, very well done. You have to make the script very dark and morbid though :D
ITS SUSIE SALMON! But really though, this story looks very intriguing and like it will be an absolute thriller that will leave people at the edge of their seats. I think it is short and to the point and really exemplifies what a logline should be like.
ReplyDelete1.I dont know what question number 1 was, so here is my answer.
ReplyDelete2. This sounds just like lovley bones...hmmmm...plagerizsm?!
3. I know i spelled that word wrong.
plagerism.. not z that's super embarassing and intreging.
DeleteI say that this logline surely leaves a guy wondering what is going to happen next. I can't find any problems with it.
ReplyDeletePersonally I think this also sounds like the movie "I know who Killed me" starring Lindsey Lohan...but hey if you can add a you're own twist to the movie, I'm sure you can make it work
ReplyDeleteThere is a twist! It will be unlike anything you have ever read before. You just wait and see. Patience Rabbit
DeleteIt remins me a little of the book called "Elsewhere" too. I think Tara is right, that it is a little bit familiar BUT if you can perhaps create a unique "in between" world, it will still hook people into it.
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That sounds quite interesting and I really don't have any criticism for the logline, very well done. You have to make the script very dark and morbid though :D
ReplyDeleteIt has the potential to be completley bad ass! im excited to see how she will solve the murder and what will play out!
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